All Comments on 'A Valentine's Solution for Spouses'

Sloppy writing - missing words, wrong words, spelling. Just hard to enjoy a story where there are so many mistakes. Even cuckold , a key word in your story, was spelled wrong.

This sort of inattention ruins stories for me.

The theme of your story is very very good !! Having both wives / girlfriends get together to discuss Sam screwing her brother Eric is a great idea; as the girls found they can get each other off all the time and enjoy it. Plus, Eric got what he always wanted which was to screw his sister. Now Jack got his wish too and each others wife has no issue with screwing the girlfriends husband and visa-versa !! There are so many naughty combinations that the 4 of them will have fun for many years now ! I sure hope Eric and Sam can be alone and bang each other silly with a lot of graphic details. How did Samantha like sucking her brother off etc. ?? Cannot wait for more, thank you.

Really fun story and super hot.

Happy Valentines Day to sexy hot people everywhere.

Teacher, Loved every word!!! Five Stars!

I really liked the original theme, and that it's not just another boiler plate incest story. here. It could’ve had more build up, and I would’ve like to have known more about the characters: age and appearance, and more background on their relationships. Part 2?

my ex girlfriend and I went on double dates with my sister and her boyfriend. and my girlfriends brother and his wife. it was nice taking weekend trips and splitting hotel rooms. we'd all go out to eat, hit up a bar or club, maybe a strip club and then fuck in the same room. lights on

But practically no build up. Too quick, with little description and detail. Keep Trying, I Like the Way You Think ! ! !

At first they said it was going to be a threesome, with Jack as passive... Since he decided to record everything I figured that would be his reward, a wank flick...

He sure as hell didn't deserve a bj and fuck with creampie in Kim, considering he violated everybodys trust, never asking to film it...

This is neither a threesome, nor a cuckold story, but a wife swap... If he was a cuckold, he would at most receive a handjob, possiblywith her even ending it before he shot.

The story was nice, but fell short. I really do like your imagination though, so I hope you will continue writing, you have potential.

Not sure Jack signed up for his wife getting fucked as well. It's a no from me.