All Comments on 'A Vampire's Pet Ch. 02'

This is a repost why can’t you deliver anything more than 60 sentences. Fifteen of which were less than five words long?

Good content just want more.

Please continue as fast as you can...

Thanks. I also would like to ask if you could post a little more lengthy chapter next time.

Again, Thank You.

Your prose could do with a little tightening, and you really must lengthen the chapters. According to your profile, we are due for another chapter soon. Don't give up, you've got promise. Just keep at it, continue sharing, and don't mind the naysayers.

I've invested ten stars in your work.

I'm sorry for the slow updates and the short chapters. I will absolutely do my best to work on length, but please bear with me as I am trying to write 2 very different stories and in college with a full time job and several other "IRL" factors. I should be able to post an update by the end of next week. Not sure if it will be posted by then but I should definitely be able to send it in by next Friday.

Will you be completing this story?