All Comments on 'A Vegas DP to Remember'

beulahthebrit, Way to go girl, nothing, but nothing beats a good DV fucking, except a nice double anal.

This story would be greatly improved by having the characters speak to each other. Dialogue is human nature, and a powerful driver of narrative. It draws the reader inside the story rather than having them in the role of passive listener.

your teacher should teach you to recognize the correct categories.

he's an asshole and incompetent, he doesn't do his job well.

he must teach you to use your ass but also your brains. it is the strongest source of excitement.

Change masters, he's a jerk.

Shakespeare eat your heart out.

Or herpes? Ugly story.

1 star

Nothing like a Vegas story to find whores and cucks sliming up LW. This is just more vile than the usual posting.

Wow! What a whorishly great fuck slut he has for a wife.

I have to agree with 26thNC, in that this "Vegas story" was a little more vile than the usual cheating wives stories found in this forum. When I read the comments, I had to scroll to the top to see if I was in the LW category, and sure enough I was.