All Comments on 'A Veil of Sky, A Bed of Earth'

Of all the things that are disturbing about UK culture, dogging has to be one of the worst. It would be bad enough if that shit happened one time and people found out about it. The fact that's it's a thing that recurs often? No wonder your empire folded. You managed to get all your men killed in war and all you have left is confused betas in denial and skanks desperate for anyone that can still get it up.

Well that was absolutely delightful.

Thank you, I really enjoyed that.

Oh! Sexy, well-written, and unexpectedly romantic, concerning both couples. I had a wonderful time reading this.

Yet another of your stories that I thoroughly enjoyed as fiction, but not as erotica. That's not to say anything negative about the erotic aspects of your story, just not my thing. But do you write non-erotica as well? You certainly have an easy way with words and dialogue. And clever little plots.

This was a bit advanced for me, somehow, but I enjoyed it! Oddly enough the shoe store scene stood out as one of my favorites. Thanks for sharing!