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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good story

"Jeff noticed that apart from the occasional eye contact from the three of them there gaze quickly returned to his mid-drift."

"their gaze" not "there gaze".

The word you are seeking is "midriff" not "mid-drift".

storyfellastoryfellaover 3 years agoAuthor
Thank you Anonymous

Yes I make mistakes but I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I think some people read stories just to point out mistakes. So for anyone that enjoys doing that I would suggest you read more of my stories...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More

That's it ??? More please :)

And soon

What happens next !!

Are we going to be invaded??

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Due to ill health as a child meant I missed out on education. One of my worst subjects was English. I've never written anything in my life apart from the odd letter. I don't pretend to be a great writer and can't imagine ever being so. I started writing for my own pleasure and...