by EaglesNyte
But your story was hot, hot, hot. Despite the many, many glitches, this is going to make me masturbate tonight. For that you get 4 stars. Properly edited, your tale could get 10 stars if that were possible. Please keep writing but review it carefully and have it edited before submitting it. Now I'm going to give myself the gift of a great cum!
Run-on sentences, poor or no punctuation, very poor grammar, missing thoughts.....