All Comments on 'A Very Loving Mother'

by qualitywheat

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Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesover 8 years ago
This story reads like it was written by a committee whose members weren't communicating with one another.

And what's with that vague and abrupt ending?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
2 star

2 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
4

But how many blouses did she have on the first time?

ap2techap2techover 8 years ago
Who cares?

The other commenters have their opinion and I have mine.

I loved the idea of raw lust instead of boring seduction. When you lust for something you just want it, however, whenever, wherever. His lust started years ago, he took his shot and got some great pussy from a woman that needed a dick badly.

Please continue her story and lust for power dicks as she calls them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
written by

Buckwheat,, maybe

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
commnet from annony is really from the asshole of lit Eat it dear annony

gave this a 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
and an other

1 star for the worthless effort

1(*) star

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I liked it !

Please do Chapter three.

Thanks Don

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Story!!!

This was one of the best older woman and young stud stories that I've ever read. The story is great because the young stud is confident and dominant in treating this sexy older woman. As in some of your other stories, I would have enjoyed him showing the bully part of his personality by giving the older woman an ass beating to show that she was his property. Also, he should have demanded cash from the older woman for the pleasure of his young rock hard cock. I hope you continue this series and other series that focus on older women (42 years old to 52 years old) with young guys between 18 years old and 21 years old. I rate this story a 5 star master piece.

Richie4110Richie4110over 8 years ago
Good story

The weakness is the precipatating event. Older woman with no previous dalliance is easily taken by a 19 yo boy? Otherwise I likes the read.

mybikecruisesmybikecruisesover 8 years ago
I can never get by no means no

No is no, or it is rape whether underneath the lady feels in heat or not. If she no it is wrong, and says no, the guy needs to respect her

TSreaderTSreaderover 8 years ago
Fun!

Kind of an abrupt beginning that left me to believe you wrote this assuming we knew everything instead of developing the story!

I enjoyed it though!

Thank you for writing!

chytownchytownover 8 years ago
Good Read***

Thanks for sharing.

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