All Comments on 'A Very Special Boys School Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Very special taste!

I did not know that there were silicon lovers, but there are all kinds of perv.. Why not use silicon dolls? And for your information it is impossible to wear 14 inches heels (if you are not english or american this means 35 cm!!!)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Rubbish

Probably written by a 12 year old with a vivid imagination

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wow

Idiotic!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Had to stop..

Reading when it said 14 inch heels.

BarbaraBarbaraabout 12 years ago
Sadly lacking true eroticism! Voted a 2 out of pity, nonetheless!

Small minds produce inferior submissions to avid Literotica fans, this much is TRUE!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Why, Oh, Why...

...do they let adolescent boys submit stories on here? Something this bad should have been deleted immediately.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I'm sorry

but if your main character is an English teacher, your story needs to be better written. It's not a terrible idea (I've read worse) but the execution is lacking something.

Still, don't be too disheartened; apply for an editor at Literotica and keep submitting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
How did this get accepted?

The English is terribly bad. Whichever editor passed this as acceptable should feel ashamed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
You lost me

At 14 inch heels

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Grammar?? Spelling?? Continuity?? Proofreader???

Deliciously decadent, BUT way too over the top,,,, the height of the shoes? the silicon sloshing around?? the horse cock of high school boys?? ...... try again!!

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