All Comments on 'A Victorian Masquerade Ch. 01'

by KAY776969

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sacksackover 18 years ago
this could be an interesting short series....

and you might want to flesh out more chapters, if you haven't already!

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 18 years ago
So sorry

that you stopped right there. I was just getting curious as to how the story would develop.

Apart from some repetition in your words, it's an interesting story.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It is my cock, my truncheon, my rod.

The archaic language was interesting, but also a bit jarring.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
???????????????

Don't tell me this is the end. If it is I'd be afraid to read another of KAY776969 stories because it may leave me hanging just like "A Victorian Masquerade"

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wonderful

It was very well written and the story line is amazing. I wish there were more chapters to this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
why

Why do you call it chapter 1 if you aren't going to continue? What a shame.

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