by KAY776969
and you might want to flesh out more chapters, if you haven't already!
that you stopped right there. I was just getting curious as to how the story would develop.
Apart from some repetition in your words, it's an interesting story.
Good luck.
Black Tulip
The archaic language was interesting, but also a bit jarring.
Don't tell me this is the end. If it is I'd be afraid to read another of KAY776969 stories because it may leave me hanging just like "A Victorian Masquerade"
It was very well written and the story line is amazing. I wish there were more chapters to this story!
Why do you call it chapter 1 if you aren't going to continue? What a shame.
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