All Comments on 'A Viper's Nest Ch. 01'

What a great introduction to your world @VioletOrchid85

I'm definitely looking forward to reading the rest of the series.

Thanks.

Typical me I named the story incorrectly. It's meant to be A Viper's Nest.

Resubmitted the story asking admins to make the change.

excellent start looking forward to the next chapter keep up the good work

Chapters 2 and 3 are awaiting approval and thanks.

It's really good writing

Thanks (to the comment from 5 days ago).

Just found this story, interesting beginning. Personally I’m having a difficult time visualizing what the aliens look like. That may be me not understanding what you have described. If I may make a suggestion; when you are writing a description, given it to someone and see if the can draw it the way you sweet it. Or if you have a reference, see if what is drawn match’s up to it. It doesn’t have to be exact, and you may find what the other person draws is better than what you were originally thinking of.

On to the next chapter

@JAFCritic

I have a reference picture for all of my characters (except for John) in a folder on my PC. I took them from various sites and found them very helpful when describing them.

If you want an example of a Viper, go on Reddit and search for scalieporn, then try and find a picture of a viper.