All Comments on 'A Viper's Nest Ch. 10'

Thanks for the new update !

I've been looking forward to this keep up the good work as always

@BramblePest and 395694

Thanks, I plan for Chapter 11 to not take two months lol.

Anyone know of any more stories like this one?

While lacking snu snu this chapter was good and definitely left me wanting more I cant wait for the next one. Do you have a social account to keep readers updated on progress?

@titaniumPomeranian

Please check my profile, there are two links listed there.

I'm glad you are enjoying my story and you'll find that from chapter 9 onwards, the frequency of snu snu will decrease. I had someone point out to me that I'm either writing a porno or a story with adult content. As I am doing the latter, I've focused more on the story than trying to get a sex scene into each chapter. They will still exist, but I want it to mean more (I don't mean romantically).

When I finish the part of the story that involves Border Station Five, I intend to go back to chapters 1 - 8 and rewrite them, add stuff, take stuff out, etc.

Very good

My 2 cents

What a great story. I have enjoyed the and the story line. I do like the way you have developed the story and not just writing about sex. I know the website we are on and all that, but reading an interesting story has it own rewards. I look forward to reading more. All chapters have been given a 5. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Thanks.

As I've said above, the plan is to move away from a porno and have it as a story with adult content :)

Great story thoroughly enjoyed it can't wait for further chapters

Thanks.

I think each chapter will now take around a month to write. Mainly due to having a job.

so waiting for the next chapter one of the best story that been on this site in a long time

Thanks.

I've some issues writing Chapter 11, and it's now being rewritten from the beginning. I think my output is now one chapter every two months, lol. You can blame my full time job for that, lol.

Great adventure on a galactic scale 🚀🤹🏼‍♀️👀🦾

Me want more, please 👽😎

The Chapter 12-13 interlude is currently waiting for admins to approve, then you'll wish it was longer :p

I'm going to give myself a week to figure out what to write for chapter 13, then I'll start it beginning of july.

John must be a submissive since he never says a word or complaint as he is manhandled and physically and sexually assaulted continually.

Yeah that’ll prolly get changed when I’m doing the chapter 10 rewrite/edit.

But confused about Captain Emu role. At the beginning she as on HEAT and waiting for her male mate. Now that she has him she hasn’t or doesn’t want to mate with him. Does she want to mate with John. Also can our snakey and furball aliens only get pregnant when they’re on heat I suppose only time will tell if John sperm DNA has been altered accidentally by the doctor if he impregnated the Ambassador. Just a thought ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

While it's true Captain Ema was in heat during chapter one, its been several days since chapter one and she's back to her normal self. Plus she wasn't aware that the steward selected for her was also a mate picked by her mother.

Ignore the stuff regarding John's over active reproductive system, it'll get adjusted when I rewrite chapter 3.

I am having r ea l. Trouble understanding the detection systems of BS5: Prideand Minerva. T he patrol ship that encountered the 5 enemy ships and destroy them along with their on vessel. As they all had reactor explosions, there should have been an infarred or EMP signal that should have been pisked up by other satellites or the main units around BS5. Tisshuod have set the defenses into high gear to defend BS5.

I might need to come up with some local astronomical reason for why sensors might not pick things up. Also, don’t forget that the nearby satellite wasn’t functioning, and so it itself would have detected things.

But yeah, thanks for letting me know :)