All Comments on 'A Viper's Nest Ch. 11'

Excellent story, as always. It feels like the other half of an uncompleted chapter 10, though - the end of this feels like a much more natural chapter transition.

Glad you’re continuing story I fear you stop right because it has been so long

Thanks for posting, I've been looking forward to this. Great work as usual. I agree with abiostudent3 that this does seem like a better chapter conclusion for 10. The pacing feels good to me and the cuts between scenes flow naturally. I love it.

Ok. I'm ready for the next chapter.

Good to see your back at writing it.. Hope you can spit out another soon.. Longer chapters as well.

Ghost

I hadn't intended for this to take 100+ days to write, so yeah, sucks when it takes ages.

Chapter 11 was written with the help of Grammarly Premium, so the flow should be better. Chapters 1-10 will get a re-write when I'm done with this section of the story.

There will be a interlude written that bridges chapters 11 and 12. Shouldn't take too long to write.

Excellent

I kinda wish in the future there would be more love parts with the captain and John and where he impregnates her it would be kinda sweet if you ask me and I’ll hope this actually happens in the future of these chapters

Funnily enough the original plan was for John and the Captain to end up in bed.

Oh so do you think it will still happen (this is a response to your response to my comment)

Unknown, the story flowed away from that idea. However, what will appear in an Interlude chapter (to be written once the book is done), is a threesome with the twins.

Oh well that sounds kinda neat but please come back to this idea I would love to see it

Awesome, entertaining, addictive, I am definitely somewhat hooked on this adventure tale. John’s having the time of his life, `wrestling` those voluptuous power girls all the time.

VioletOrchid85, you rock. More, please 📡 🏆

Thanks.

Oh but can you do that anyways it would be kinda interesting

A great space story. Eroticism aside, the plot keeps you hooked. Using reptiles is a marvelous twist. Hope you can continue.

Thanks, I’m writing chapter 12 at the moment. Don’t forget to read the interlude chapter.

The one story I keep coming back here for, and I will keep coming back! You got this (: Writing is no easy feat, tho you make it seem as such lol. Can't wait for the next part

Thanks.

How many more chapters do you plan on writing? And will we see him fighting with the armored nanosuit, (with his special modifications of course)?

Unknown how many chapters there will be. I know how the story ends, and most of what happens now until the end. Just not the overall length. John’s modified nanosuit will most likely get an alteration when I rewrite chapters 1-10. However, I doubt we’ll see him in it again during Volume One. Volume Two is when it will most likely turn up again.