All Comments on 'A Virgin's Paradise'

GREAT!!!!!!

Loved it!! write more

Hey guys!! Please don't forget to RATE this story!! Hope you enjoyed it.. :)

Damn.....

Rated it 5 stars. Please continue the wonderful job.U have a flair for writing,awesome. Please add a bit of description of the girl and her penchant for wearing sexy revealing clothes pre and post marriage should be highlighted too,especially sarees,ornaments those kinda details.too good.

please do continue and write more stories with the same girl as main protagonist

This is fuckin' good!! blew my mind off.. please keep writing.. please..

Just. Wow. Expecting the next chapter!!

Loved it. 5 stars!!

How is this story interracial? They're both Indian, one is light and one is dark. WTF? Vaseline? No real lube in India? Lastly, the hero was a big turn off. Porn star idiot speaking, no finesse in fucking and he smoked! I did like the heroine. She was funny.

well written and erotic, would have preferred a tease, a little bit of effort before you were conquered...also do we see 3 some (MFM) and Foursome (couple) coming up...please do also share the sexual adventures right up to the marriage and afterwards.....keep writing :)

Most body builders are so involved with themselves they barely think of a girls pleasure. Stories like this are hard to believe! No writing skill can compensate for lack of understanding!

LOVED it!! 5 stars!! Please write more in the series.. It'd be nice to see Vanshika whored out by her cuckold husband..

Loved the descriptive style very much.. but it was very looooong..

excellent story. loved the character of the girl. please continue writing.

this story has so much potential and so many future paths

Justin should pimp out Vanshika to his friends. She would have to fuck any guy he chooses. (sorry... i know that no one needs my opinions but yet...)

It was perfect fuck...screwing servicing fresh cunt..same as i, but the diference is only i love married ladys who are dominant..