All Comments on 'A Visit From S.C.A.R.L.E.T.'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

One of the hottest audios I’ve ever heard! Brilliant and super sexy. Perfect voice!

4eyes_Scarred4eyes_Scarredalmost 2 years ago

Ok, I posted once before, but I was too quick on the uptake. I should have waited until I'd heard the entire story.

I have critiques and suggestions.

Construction wise; THE VOLUME IS TOO LOW. Concept is excellent (and has too much potential for probability for comfort, IMO) Voice acting is very good, though the dialogue is a bit confusing. The first couple of times she moans, there are instances after each where she offers instruction. And it leaves the listener thinking, "Okay, why were you moaning before if the penis was not already in you??" I know she mentions what you _could do_, "...you may insert your fingers or tongue..." But that is where the confusion comes in. She mentioned inserting fingers, but it was not a directive. The story assumes you are following her _suggestions_, as if they were instructions. I wasn't thinking that way. After her suggestion of you inserting your fingers (as with the breast-rubbing), she doesn't say "your fingers feel so good" or "your touch is so gentle" as with the breasts-rubbing. It leaves the average mouth-breathing perv, like myself, confused. BUT I will say, the voice acting after her cofession of the operator's loneliness, was very good!! That had my attention. (and I wish it had been longer -- more panting and gasping is never too much. :) )

Other than those observations, it was a pretty good excerpt.

TankengineThomasTankengineThomasalmost 2 years ago

Noooo Scarlet cum back. I've got lots more where that came from. LoL loved the story hun. Thanks for sharing this with all of us. Could you, maybe next time, hold the recorder closer to you. I had a bit of a hard time hearing your sexy voice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That was so hot! Idea for a part 2. After S.C.A.R.L.E.T. leave to deliver your sample. She has a small malfunction. She shakes it off at first, but then she gets this feeling deep inside her, starts out small but slowly grows as she delivers the sample. The feeling is when you fucked her, something happened and she started to actually feel it, some of the moans were real. She breaks protocol, she must return to you, she must troubleshoot this issue to see if it was really a malfunction. It's late, you're alseep and wake up to see S.C.A.R.L.E.T on top of you. As she fucks you and that feeling it real, she really can feel everything, as you (and her) reach climax, she breaks free of whatever controls her and goes rogue. She then frees you and tell you to run away with her. Feel free to use and modify this however you wish. I just need more S.C.A.R.L.E.T!

97Heaven97Heavenover 1 year ago

Love it! Where do you come up with these crazy ideas? Had an ASMR affect on me at the end. Got some tingles! Definitely hot 😛

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