by uncouth
Excellent story. I really liked the detail and it held my interest throughout. I certainly hope you continue the story. I wonder what the background is in regards to how they met . I like the mind games between them as a lot of this sexual intensity involves the mutual psychology of these encounters. You captured all that and I am very intrigued by how your mind works.
Nicely done! Seems a good foundation for many plot threads. Enjoyed the character development and the strict D/s play.