All Comments on 'A Walk in Central Park...'

Great story, hope to see more soon

To many mistakes. How was he against her back with coat on ? How could she answer question with panties balled in mouth ? Gave up after that. Story needs details and be consistent.

Though as has already been mentioned, it probably would have benefited from another edit. Still, don't let this discourage you - your stuff is good and practice makes perfect. I particularly like that you didn't take the easy way out at the end and make her husband the "attacker" - maybe he was and maybe he wasn't. Four stars.