All Comments on 'A Walk in the Park'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Stranger

What a story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Superb

A lovely warm yet erotic story - more please

1suitedbi1suitedbiabout 4 years ago
Simplicity

Lovely, simple story.

More detail would be nice (a personal thing for me). Especially if the kilts had been kept on for longer, 2 guys playing in kilts can be awesome.

Really enjoyed it though keep on writing please.

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Career; apprentice engineer to Company Director. I have had a number of blog stories published on the web and on this site, short stories which have been based on real life events. Some of my stories are provocative and erotic. Each story has a message about how we see ou...