All Comments on 'A Walk in the Woods'

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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 6 years ago
Nice finish

Loved the twist at the end! Wish that were Pam and I. Not my wife but someday my lover I hope. Well done!

HitchhikerHitchhikerover 3 years ago

Nice short piece, for the ladies though!

The tense is a little to in your face as a male reader. Loved the picture your words placed in ones mind, good work. Work readers don't always appreciate.

I've often thought Literotica should have a category, just for the ladies and just for the men.

Now I've got some reading to do, cheers bud.

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Lover of sex, I mostly write about what excites me. It's easier that way!