by The Mouse
Nice short piece, for the ladies though!
The tense is a little to in your face as a male reader. Loved the picture your words placed in ones mind, good work. Work readers don't always appreciate.
I've often thought Literotica should have a category, just for the ladies and just for the men.
Now I've got some reading to do, cheers bud.
Loved the twist at the end! Wish that were Pam and I. Not my wife but someday my lover I hope. Well done!