by AlinaX
That final line is hilarious as is the cynical self-knowing way you write her POV, love it.
Wow, first read of you, for me. Erotically animalistic, or animalistically erotic, pick one. This certainly won’t be the last read, nicely done. Thank you.
I like how you describe her not so rational thinking while drunk, and using it to make her reactions to a naked guy in the woods believable.
You guys...
Okay. Thanks for the ideas. I'll play with them a little and see where they take me.
I agree with all of the comments that I have read..a 2nd/3rd/4th episode of this would be amazing! So please consider it!
I'd love to find out about... her transformation/ if he becomes a permanent mate/ if she is now pregnant/ how this affects her life/ more about
Greg/ is he from a pack & what happens when they find out what he has done.
I hope that you're able to continue this.
Thanks very much,
Jenny xxx
Thanks - but I don't really know how to. But who knows. I'll think about it.
I was feeling a little guilty about her reaction to the name, so I love that you liked that.
Thanks for reading!
I like how the protagonist has fairly realistic and rational thoughts about the whole situation. Especially her disappointment at his name, and the fact that going barefoot in the woods hurts. Little details like that. This was a good read~
I was so jealous of the protagonist. Really neat story. I hope there is a sequel.