by Miss Rule
I read the story and it flowed like an author who has had books printed and decided to have her/his hand at erotic literature. I could see the detail given in vivid color and after all, thats why we/I read, to become involved in the story and to me, I was one of the characters, thats how vivid and well put together it was. This person has some talent and I hope they continue to write. I was really turned on by this story, it was amazing and I've read alot at this site and this rates top in my book. Kudos to the writer and keep it up, excuse the pun.
I am with the other poster--probably the best out there--Well written and incredibly erotic--I can picture it happening (I wish it were for real) to me.
Wow! You nailed it, right on the head. Sensual domination, combined with the erotic coupling of co-workers, and, finally, my favorite part - the male slut sub! Please keep writing stories of this ilk.