All Comments on 'A Ward's Passion'

Quite the basis for an extended story. I hope you will consider a further investigation into these two lives.

i agree with the last comment that a longer story about these two would be great

i enjoyed it alot...the only thing is that it felt really rushed in end....you could have gone a bit slower and put more detail in like you did in the beginning. Maybe make the acceptance on his part take a bit longer. It was a good story though