All Comments on 'A Warlord's Prison'

A simple spellcheck world fix most of your problems. All except for the one where you can't write worth shit

@inno0cent_bystander its a damn smut I wrote when I was horny, you think its supposed to be good?

Is there going to be another part cause this so great stuff. Also the small issues are just spelling so that’s all you need to fix. My god is this good it might just be a horny thought but ram is it well written!

I think you should continue, your writing will get better and just get one of the literotica editors to fix up the spelling mistakes.

Promissing story. Hope you go on.

Bit of an odd story (the futa/male action isn't really my thing), but the characters felt realistic with believable motivations. I particularly liked how it ended, with the once loving couple at odds with each other.

I'd be very interested in reading more of your work.