All Comments on 'A Watchful Brother Ch. 01'

look at the ages

That was hot. Write more.

DDD tits = FAIL plus there is no such thing as DDD tits.

chubby girl = FAIL no one likes a chubby girl.

aal in all it was a total FAIL.

you need editing help. Your mistakes could have been more distracting if you had written a longer chapter. In addition, please consult a chart regarding breast sizes in the future. Personally, I would just use terms like big or large and leave actual size to the reader's imagination.

Fucking rubbish.

That was amazing, I fucking hate reading and having to get through 6 pages of lead up shit before I can cum..short and sweet. Enough imagery to paint the picture in my head..well done

As they say keep the presses rolling. Need more chapters.

My wife and I had been married about 2 years when, during a hot round of sex one night, she told me how her older brother had always tried to get in her pants. I told her she should be ashamed to leave her brother with blue balls. I insisted that she apologize and beg to make it up to him. She did and remained his slut to use whenever he pleased.

Nothing like a couple of bottles of wine to heat-up the rape.... I mean incest. Drunk = nonconsent.

Really liked it, can't wait to read more chapters as long as you keep them together exclusively, bringing others in always ruins the story. Thank you

MUST be chapter 2 and perhaps more. Get sister pregnant, maybe Mom too.

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When something is called chapter 1 and turns out to be chapter 1 and only.

What happened? 8 years and nothing more? Would you be kind enough to let

everyone know what happened to you and your writing.?

Normally I am very pro writer. But when you start something, than drop it, an explanation is in order!