All Comments on 'A Watchful Brother Ch. 01'

What happened? 8 years and nothing more? Would you be kind enough to let

everyone know what happened to you and your writing.?

Normally I am very pro writer. But when you start something, than drop it, an explanation is in order!

When something is called chapter 1 and turns out to be chapter 1 and only.

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MUST be chapter 2 and perhaps more. Get sister pregnant, maybe Mom too.

Really liked it, can't wait to read more chapters as long as you keep them together exclusively, bringing others in always ruins the story. Thank you

Nothing like a couple of bottles of wine to heat-up the rape.... I mean incest. Drunk = nonconsent.

My wife and I had been married about 2 years when, during a hot round of sex one night, she told me how her older brother had always tried to get in her pants. I told her she should be ashamed to leave her brother with blue balls. I insisted that she apologize and beg to make it up to him. She did and remained his slut to use whenever he pleased.

As they say keep the presses rolling. Need more chapters.

That was amazing, I fucking hate reading and having to get through 6 pages of lead up shit before I can cum..short and sweet. Enough imagery to paint the picture in my head..well done

Fucking rubbish.

you need editing help. Your mistakes could have been more distracting if you had written a longer chapter. In addition, please consult a chart regarding breast sizes in the future. Personally, I would just use terms like big or large and leave actual size to the reader's imagination.

DDD tits = FAIL plus there is no such thing as DDD tits.

chubby girl = FAIL no one likes a chubby girl.

aal in all it was a total FAIL.

That was hot. Write more.

look at the ages