by MemberX
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12 good chapters, but this finale was one big disappointment. It deserved better ending than this.
Rapier
You mentioned that Cathy and and Scott were not really Cousins but only Rani and Steve knew that would you care to write another Chapter and explain this further Please
I want to say I disliked this story but, I can't really call it a story. It's more just a collection of bland, repetitive sex scenes with random characters who are so lacking in development that there's no real difference between any of them, except that some are teenagers, some are adults, some have small boobs, and some have big boobs.
It seems like you want to create a big, shared universe where all the different characters know each other, and that's fine. I think that would be an interesting thing to read about. The problem is the characters are being swapped in and out so much that there's no investment in any of them.