All Comments on 'A Weekend at the Beach'

Everything about this story was hot. The build up, the realism, the ending. HOT HOT HOT.

Great erotica! This is how a follow-on story to the original great erotica story should be written.

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what the fuck she knows they are going to the beach and she might fuck her brother and doesn't take her birth control pills only an ass or a real uncaring cock tease would do that i couldn't even finish it i was just as bad as the first chapter why would he want anything to do with such an uncaring bitch all she cares about is herself and being a tease

just as bad as the first chapter. after all the teasing in the last chapter when the parents said they were going on vacation and the kids would have to share a room any guy with a brain would have told his parents "AFTER THE LAST TIME WE SHARED A BED THERE IS NO WAY I AM GOING TO DO IT AGAIN I'LL BRING A TENT AND SLEEP OUTSIDE OR STAY HOME" keep it somewhat realistic

Condoms in stories are such a turn off. It ruins the mood in any story.

Good story, but what happened to the first chapter?

it says its a follow-up, but there's no other chapter. incomplete, needs another chapter - which 12 years later isn't coming!