All Comments on 'A Weird One Ch. 17'

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XXMuffDiverXXXXMuffDiverXXalmost 11 years ago
WOW

Chapters received a day apart~Be Still My Heart!! I have to sing your praises JPB for not only giving us 2 chapters in 2 days (4 in less than 2weeks) but they were also poignant and entertaining!! Please keep up the Great Work!! Can't wait to see who Bobby's Attacker is and what is planned for him, but I have no doubts it will be worth the "Hopefully" Short wait to find out!!

Time for Bobby to lay the Law down to Mom and tell her that His time with her is Fantastic, and He enjoys it, but She needs to "give, as well as take" when it comes to their time together, as it seems she is ALWAYS Dictating, when, where, and for how long, so it is time for Bobby to inform her that if she is not willing to accept

"leftovers" on his schedule, then she can look elsewhere!!

Hasta LaByeBye Natasha, wise up, it is OVER!! Gail might still get a chance, but I'm thinking Carol and Becky will work something out!!

billyjim55billyjim55almost 11 years ago

Oh chit, now Bobbies on the ground caught off guard and you stop there lol. I'm glad your firing them out closer together. great job ty/ bill

SyrustheVirusSyrustheVirusalmost 11 years ago

I love Becky and Carol. Becky's speech just makes me hope that her and Bobby can work something out. Gail seems also to be developing as a character which is great. She offered to give up Wednesdays for Bobby, plus the wedding comment; no matter what happens Gail will always be around. Tasha is a mess, but she deserves what she gets. The only question is how desperate will she get? Gloria wanting more is a good sign too. I love that Bob told his mom off.....FINALLY! She is my least favorite character in this series as she only cares about herself.

I doubt Eddie was behind the attack. Most likely it was Becky's ex or the losers from the club. Can't wait till next chapter. 3 chapters on one week. I feel sooo spoiled and I love it. Keep up the good work!

JounarJounaralmost 11 years ago
5*

Another awesome chapter. Glad to see Tasha seems to be out of the picture for good tho I hope Gail stays gone as well and she's been nothing but a conniving bitch from the start. Becky and Carol are a great addition to the story and I love the fact they keep fucking with Tasha :)

The lack of the usual gangbang crap this chapter was a blessing as the whole Wednesday night stuff has gotten old by and tbh it's not like Bobby has to share to get his fun. Bobby's mom really is a gigantic bitch at this point and needs to be put in her place.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 11 years ago
Damn ! With as many enemies as Bobby has made is a short period of time.

It's hard to tell who is trying to kick his ass now.

I'm impressed by the amount of chapters that has been posted in such a short time. It has been a good weekend to be able to read so much of this very good story.

Thanks Bob, for all of the effort and the good read.

eros99eros99almost 11 years ago
All Good Things

I hope this has a conclusion soon. It has been an interesting series; but it seems like there's no end in sight. This guy seems like a grade a douche too. He's got all these rules for his harem; but they don't apply to him. Tasha is better off without him, too bad she doesn't know it. I hope he ends up with Gail in the end. She's the only one that knows whats what.

gabaagabaaalmost 11 years ago
Interesting but Not Very Enjoyable

He really is a scumbag! I hope one of the many boyfriends/husbands he's cheated on will destroy him. Not hopeful though. He'll probably land up with Natasha or, even worse, Becky. Let's hope that whoever it is cheats on him relentlessly.

XXMuffDiverXXXXMuffDiverXXalmost 11 years ago
PLEASE DON'T BELIEVE THE NAYSAYERS JPB

While I firmly believe that EVERYONE has a right to their own opinion, I also believe that others have the right to disagree with those opinions, so with that said, I will express my disagreements:

To the people who think this wonderful series has run its course, the solution is quite simple~~Just do not click on the title when the next chapter appears, You have many other fine options if You no longer want to read this series!!

To the person or persons who thinks Bobby is a Doucebag, I have to wonder if You have been reading the same series as I have. Bobby has ALWAYS treated each Woman that he has been with in a manner of respect, letting her know the situation, and making sure that if she went someplace with him, she also was taken home by him. He is a dedicated young man, who has a very firm sense of commitment, and will always honor his end, and will not tolerate it if the commitment is not reciprocated. As for the Husbands and Boyfriends that He has "Cucked", each and every one of the Woman involved has approached him First, so it is not like He sets out to destroy a relationship. (unlike Eddie Wooters, whose sole purpose in life is to try and make other Men suffer for his own pleasure) My opinion is that if a Man is "Cucked" it is nobody's fault but his own, because he either wants to be Cucked, or he is not taking care of business at home and his significant other needs to look elsewhere, So once again Bobby is not a Doucebag for doing this, he is simply taking care of commitments that his woman are asking for!!

Hopefully, I am speaking for many others, but at Least for myself, I will state that JPB has done a wonderful job with this series, and selfishly I will state that he can not turn out chapters quickly enough to make me Happy, but I realize it takes time to make each chapter unique and interesting, so whenever JPB is happy with his work, He will submit another chapter!!

Please Keep Up The great Work JPB

RoukleyRoukleyalmost 11 years ago
oh lord give me strength

Bobby is indeed a douche as he is the one

who cheated FIRST but then again he IS a

stupid teenager, they all do that dumb kind

of crap, but Natasha fell a few notches low

on the scales beneath him with all of her

incessent game playing bullshit... she had a

chance too many with Eddie Wooters, and may

have saved herself a small speck of light

for a future with him had she not been so

insistant of her innocence through obvious

guilt...so fuck her.

I think Gail had a tremendous shot until that

ugly ordeal with the gangbang brotha. She just

HAD to harken to her cousins game playing &

all but completely bottomed out of any future

hopes with Bobby...not to mention If it were me

I'd find NO comfort in "When I was with Tom

I was a little bit in love with you..." nice...

that just says that she'll be looking even when

she's with him...nope nope nope...Goodbye baby.

Vonda & her mom are okay for the interracial

novelty, sexy at times but annoying as hell,

so I'm glad to see that that shits coming to an

end.

Marge is cool but a serious relationship with

her would be too much trouble all around...and

the ladies at work are all cheating hussies

anyway...although I do not agree with a person

cheating because their significant other is not

savy to certain desires I gotta inquire as to

What kind of asshole does not like pussy eating

and anal!?

Bobby's mom was low on my list of decent

human beings the moment she played games with

her own son at the club that night...I was very

happy with Bobby when he tossed the glass of

water in her face that time and very happy to

hear him lay into her this time. I think that

the credibility in her feelings towards her own

husbands infidelities fell off the grand fucking

canyon with all the nasty shit she's done over

time...if anything...HE'S the one who deserves to

be pissed.

As it stands I see that the only straight shooters

are Mary, Nancy to a point, and the new girls Carol

& Becky... thus far... I like where this is going.

I do hope the story is almost done as its been

one crazy ride reading them all... fun, sexy, eye

opening, irritating, heart wrenching ect ect...but

this will be one not soon forgotten.

Jesus H Hong... the last time I was a part of

an emotional rollercoaster ride of this magnatute

in fictional surroundings was that summer I got

into my moms day time soap operas.

stillkickin2013stillkickin2013almost 11 years ago
Easy to forget...

With as many characters as there are in this story, it's easy to forget which one is the subject at any particular time. Such must be the case when JPB wrote "I'll think on it Gloria. No promises, but I will think on it." when he was talking to GAIL. Not the first instance of character confusion, and I'm sure not the last, with the number of characters which JPB has introduced in this series. Honestly, I'm amazed he has been able to keep them straight and once again I feel this demonstrates Bob's abilities as an author. Keep up the excellent work, Bob!!!

digger33digger33almost 11 years ago
I Agree

I fully agree with xxMuffDiverxx's comments. If you don't like the story line then don't click on the title. I have enjoyed each and every chapter and look forward to each new chapter. Keep up the great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
When

When did Gail become Gloria?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow this story is like 10 years old but the white girls/moms are the same even back then. Gail and Bobby’s mom are everywhere these days being BBC gb sluts

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesover 1 year ago

Thanks for your writing.

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