by lannasage
I have been waiting for absolute ages for you to update this story. Thank you! Made my day reading this. Cannot wait for the good stuff, like Cassandra and Kylie properly mating and Kennedy, well she just needs to shut up and realise that she is going to bear a lot of pups!
You finally updated! There is so much I want to read and know. Roy and Kylie, Kennedy and Rinaldi and Cassie and Caleb are all in their own sense like sub stories and I want a full account of each one. Yes I'm greedy… but only because it's so good!
there are some errors in spelling and grammar, such as between he's or she's that make reading a little difficult, but overall a good update
BBut please be quicker with the next one. It'd been so long id forgotten the plot and had to reread the whole thing! I really love the story but need to be able to stay into it and get answers not wait around forever
I was so excited to see you had updated I absolutely loved this chapter and can not wait for the next one
I'm very happy that this story has updated. Definitely was hoping Kennedy, would put up more a fight. Her feistiness has made her my favorite character. With this update, I can only hope that Poseidon will be updated as well. Pleeeeeeeaaasssee! LOL
I hope you're doing well. Please don't forget about this story! I really hope you continue it! I check back for an update every day!!! I love your writing and support you so much <3
It’s a good storyline but can you get someone to proof read it before you publish. Have seen quite a few easy to fix errors. Keep it up
Understand life is busy and writing a side treat for you. This is a very enjoyable story you're weaving here with delightful characters we can easily identify with. By a means, Mz. Sage.......do continue. You have a greedy fan base thirsting for the products of your creative mind. Delicious!!
Lovingly this story! My fave is Kennedy, for some reason she reminds me of Prue from the show Charmed of the oldest, the tough responsible one who had to take the parent role of her sisters but secretly had a fun passionate side that she hides while Kylie and Cass remind me of Phoebe and Pipper. I love Kenny's spitfire attitude and hope she doesn't lose it or bend easily to Rinaldi and the others but stay true to herself while evolving. I love all the characters and their own individual love stories wrapped into a larger story. You are a great writer, regardless of the few minor errors, because some authors still can't master a multifaceted story with unique characters with their own perspective without the story dragging or focusing on one set of characters at a time. Good job and hope you update soon!!!
I am dying for more. Roy and Kylie are definitely my favorite.
hi I just finished reading all 6 chapters I really enjoy your story is a very well tool story I hope you finish it and I'm just happy too reader
I absolutely loved this story. I am patiently waiting for the next chapters!
Please continue I just found this and I'm so drawn in. Would really like more of Cassandra and Caleb I feel like they got pushed to back for the cousins and betas.
I really enjoyed reading this story thus far. Cannot wait for other updates. Thank you
This is a good story. I wonder if alejandro would calm down if he knew tiana was his mate, and just focus on his packs welfare. How much longer can caleb and cassie's wolf hold out?
OMG!!!!!! I so love this story especially Kenedy and Rinaldi. They're my favorite couple as they complement each other's character. Please do not abandon this story please please please hoping for you to update soon. Withhhh loveeeeee ❤️❤️❤️❤️
You are very good at writing this genre of stories.
I sincerely hope that you don't abandon this.
If you have no intention of finishing, please let your readers know.
Loved loved loved all of your stories.... But this by far is the best you truly have a talent. Please finish "a were story". I've falling in love!!!!
I feel like these chapters have been almost an introduction to an amazing story. The characters have depth and and strong personalities and I want to know more. You have a wonderful imagination and great writing skills. By the date of the last submission, it appears you’ve concluded this story. But it has definitely not ended for your characters. Please pick it up again. Pleeaase
Why are there so many unfinished stories? Can we at least get another chapter, thanks
Stop trying to force her to stay. Kennedy should he able to make her own choice without everyone saying no, you have to stay.
Please continue this story and please tone down the bitch in Kennedy's personality she unreasonably attacks everyone including her sister and cousin someone who does that constantly wouldn't have friends and eventually her family would get tired of it and wouldn't put up with her once they became adults. The 6 chapters you have written so far are pretty good so far and your world building is ok and everyone wants to know what happens next so please write more.
Really enjoying this story
Thanks for sharing your writing
Really great to see your continuing to write
Looking forward to when you get back to continuing this story
Thank you
CRW
Well another good one unfinished and left for us to imagine. Lov yr stories but life happens
Wow- I came for the smut but stayed for the story, and now I’m hooked.
If this were published (with some innocent looking cover art so I could read it whenever) I’d be the first in line to buy it.
Can’t wait for the next Chapter!
What do I think of this story? I think it’s great. Masterfully written, engaging and worthy of being continued to a finish. I also think it should be removed as the author abandoned the story and it’s cruel to leave those of us that read every word hanging.