- Lesbian Sex
- A Wetter Summer Night
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All Comments on 'A Wetter Summer Night'
by IsabellaEmily
- 37 Comments
Anonymousabout 4 years agoThat was INSANELY hot. I was literally dripping when I finished reading it. I never comment on stories like ever but this got me good. Please write more like this!!
danno99about 4 years agoperfect part 2...so freaking erotic!!!!
and there's more to come!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymousabout 4 years agoThis may be the most erotic story on LitE regardless of genre. The organic evolution of the intimacy between Rachel and Emily was truly beautiful.
A bit of advice though....... You should reclassify the first part of the story as lesbian instead of fetish. There wasn't enough water play to warrant that label and I'm sure it's hurting the number of views its receiving. You should also clarify the fact that this is the second installment of the series in the preface. Especially with the two being labeled in different categories. The previous comment hoping for a part two should be proof that it isn't clear enough. It would be unfortunate if the maximum number of LitE readers didn't read this great little story.
PS. If you do decide to go heavier into the water sports in future installments you should then consider consolidating the whole series into a novella and post it in fetish. I personally wouldn't recommend it, but your the author so you do you. I'll read it either way but you will probably lose the wider audience.
theghostwriterabout 4 years agoWonderful story, please keep going. You have a wonderful descriptive ability that makes your story very real
Justplainjeffover 3 years agoBullseye!! My 73 year old wife of 50 years read this with me and jumped my body, over and over. My God, what a story.
IsabellaEmilyover 3 years agoAuthorThank you all for the feedback! Especially Justplainjeff.....I'm so glad you and your wife enjoyed it so much!
Paul4playover 3 years agoExcellent!
Great build up of sexual tension...and release!
Beautifully written....
Anonymousabout 3 years agoKeeps the sweet style and "all in" sexuality of the first part.
naughtyandy4uover 2 years agoI thought the first part was hot and sexy but this blew it away, your use of words to convey all that was happening painted such a wonderful picture of their experience. Feels like it was something you were a part of.
Devilbobyover 2 years agoLoved it makes our camping trips to the lakes ( U.K. That is ) seem a bit tame really. ( weather similar though ), absolutely five stars.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoAbsolutely fabulous, so steaming hot. I absolutely adore Cunt in every way, my live in fuck buddies swing both ways simply love to watch them get each other off, Prior to me fucking one while eating the other, then swapping, they both love eating my cream pie from each other’s do I.
splayer1over 1 year agoHot. For a two-parter on just two pages I sure did form sharp mental images. But I wanna be the cooler next time. 5
Scooterloverover 1 year agoBrilliant writing. So powerful. Loved this and the first one. Can’t wait for more
Anonymous10 months agoOMG!! MORE!! MORE!! Not just a good tongue lashing, a serious cunt to cunt rub!! Not scissors, more missionary but rub! Rub!
IsabellaEmily8 months agoAuthor@thorbet, I have an indirect sequel to this called An Even Wetter Summer Day. Since the first two were based on a true story that started and ended where these stories start and end, I titled and continued the story differently since it's complete fiction by part three.
Oshkosh603 months agoWonderful writing, lovely story. Anais Nin I believe once said, when we write we live life twice. Thank you for sharing.
Felix Squalitas3 months agoThis is well written, and paced perfectly for pornography. It doesn't hurt that you started with pissing, which is one of my fave kinks.
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