by cyberfun
Hey, that's not the way it's supposed to be. Santa is supposed to visit every neighborhood and give all the good little boys a nice gift. I've been especially good this year, so Santa, what do I get. ;-) MLF
i read that wishing i was Hershel, then i pictured myself as him, then i was imagining i was him, all signs of a good story. i am a very picky reader & i don't mind a detailed description of someone when it is setting the scene for an original sex scene that doesn't use stereotypical language. as for being 'passable'? beauty is in the eye of the beholder & i've met a few mature men who wouldn't attract me, who after some make-up, hair & wardrobe became attractive females. naturally younger men who were/are beautiful females but the more mature who have been dressing for a long period have an unique persona that is more sexually attractive & attracting than any other gender or mixture of two or more.
that's my opinion & your story conveys this perfectly. well worth developing further.