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njlaurennjlaurenalmost 10 years ago
Yuck

Not much more to say

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great

More, please!

LadyvetLadyvetalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Constructive criticism, please

Please tell me why you disliked the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Very good story

It was worth 2 loads from Me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
will there be a part 2?

I loved it, kept my fingers and clit busy the entire time

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

I loved it. I've returned to it, and have also read back over it to savor the nuances. That says a lot! You had several elements that tied together - some were more subtle and emerged toward the end. It was well thought out and well written - with very few stylistic distractions. It looks as though this is your first post. Hope that it won't be your last!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
little mistake, maybe?

I'm not totally shure because I havn't read it twice, but wasn't it mention that the last time she had sex with her husband that he didn't cum into her pussy but her mouth? And at the very end there stood that he cummed into her mouth the first time... Well, maybe it was also mention that it wasn't the mouth but her face the last time tehy had sex - but regardles of that little mistace the story was wonderfull, it was an fantastic story and I can't even describe how good it was <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Wait, the story never specified what happened to the black women that were married to white men.

lookbob66lookbob66almost 4 years ago
goodness

I've read 2 of your four stories and they're well written and well edited, but they are very dark. I hope that's not where you live.

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