by HookedonPhoenix
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As a kid in elementary school I loved the Chose Your Fate books. You did a good job of recreating that sense of choice given this limited format.
I Loved the Format of it and I Especially how it is a Second POV Story which is Perfect but when went on to the other chapters of the this Series, your Format Changed so much for me that I just Felt like a Regular Story for me, which is what I wasn't looking for. I wished you Kept the POV and the Format of it the same as this, and I'm also sorry I have No Fucking clue on what you're trying to Accomplish with the Chapter 2 of the Intro
I Love Not only the Format but also the Point Of View of this Particular Part of the Series so Fitting, but as I moved on to the other Chapters of the Series I Felt that they read more like Regular Stories, which is what I wasn't looking for. I wished you Kept with Not only the Point Of View but also the same format of this Particular Story and I don't know that you where trying to Accomplish with the Second Intro Chapter. But I did still Enjoyed this One Chapter