All Comments on 'A Wife A Little To Understanding'

When "To" was used in the title when you clearly meant "Too", I was alerted to look for spelling, usage and grammatical problems. I'm guessing that English might not be your original language. I say this constructively. Literotica connects you with volunteer editors that will be happy to review your work and make it more coherent and better flowing. You have good ideas in your story and a good sense of humor and poetic justice. It's the technical side with which you need help. Scroll up on the homepage and you'll see an option to click for help. Good luck.

I hope you know that you cant use poppers in a drink. Also doing poppers and viagra can be a deadly mix. Please don't encourage their use together. Otherwise a good story that can be improved with some proofreading.