by thereshegoes123
OMG, what a hot story. i love how the wife knew he was a closet gay and forced him to reveal his true self. The emasculation dn humiliation in front of his wife was exquisitely erotic.
Why wouldn't he have said go ahead and fuck her because I never will again and why wouldn't he want a divorce? 911 as soon as he can escape. Did he have no job and his wife doesn't care about lost income? Did she already despise her husband when she married him or was it seeing him looking at the neighbor that made her hate him so much?
It seems like you don't plan to have a sequel, but I hope that is not the case. Definitely a lot of potential to continue this.
Sizzling fantasy. Not a fan of the rape scene, but your descriptions are beautifully crafted and make the story arousing - a real turn on. The readers become the people beyond the mirrors watching and stimulating themselves! Good writing.
I dunno man, it was hot in places but that cold sting kinda ruins it for me. The fact that Phil clearly doesn't love him, his wife married him only to discard him.
Poor dude would end up divorced, lonely, penniless, unloved and abandoned. I feel too sorry for that character to enjoy this.
It would be a much much better story if Phil was fully gay instead of being into Brooke and there was a spark of affection that could potentially blossom into a kinky romance.
If his wife didn't threaten divorce to get him to comply, since she obviously planned to do that anyway. Since he's gay/bi and she already dominates him she could easily just get him to go along with it naturally... ya know so it wouldn't be straight-up rape.
And if he winked or waved at her during that ending scene, that'd be a nice bowtie on the story.
Well told story, the authors sex scenes are hot as usual. This was a bit darker than I expected. The wife for being an evil bitch doesn't have any redemptive qualities. Ethan was a weak submissive young man unsure of himself and maybe with some prodding goes that route anyway. But to just coldly hand him over to be raped and turned into a slave, and it looks like divorce him behind his back. That's some cold shit. I still liked the story.
All the way up to when she became and aduterous whore was incredibly sexy and a big turn on for me.
But, He had a choice. He could have said no to the rape. When Phil said ok I'm going to fuck you wife, he should have said he would divorce her and bring up charges for what she did.
Now that I have had time to digest this story,
A. Ethan should have know better than to get strapped down. Obviously, they are in a FLR. Him doing the cleaning and laundry.
B. He didn't get far with the threat of fucking his wife instead of him. He could have waited to see how far she would go.
C. When they got home, he should have put up a fight not to go. He may have gotten beat up by the bigger guy, but at least he could have gotten the point across that he really didn't want this and see if his wife cared enough
to have relented and stopped it.
D. The couple should have had a conversation when they got back. She should have checked to see how he was. If he liked it, want to do it again? You know the normal after care from this traumatization.
And finally,
E. She didn't have to be such a bitch. Guide her husband into this with loving care if she suspected he was Bi. Talk about his feelings and how she feels about this. A gentle threesome to lead into the lifestyle where he is the center of attention. This may have lead to great times or even, as much as I hate it, cuckolding. Where all are having fun and not forced.
The idea that he became Phil's sex slave and eating on the floor is also over the top for someone to jump into.
And apperantly, it was all so she could fuck other guys.
Taking all this into account, it is a fictional story that has some great descriptions and leaving out the fact that he was raped, pretty hot in sections.
We should come to expect this from the author since he has written other "out there" stories like the futa mother fucking her son.
All in all, some sexy turn on stuff.
I'm hesitant, but looking forward to read other stuff by them.
P.S Anything with gentle fem dom in it to come?
Wow. Couldn't stop reading. I hope you finish the story and let us know what happens with their journey. Please finish
Great story, cnc at it's finest. I would love to be in Ethan's position on the pummel. Enjoying a nice prostate massage then feeling that hot cum flood my ass!
Please do more gay male stuff like this and Sailor Boy. Both of them are really hot!
Very hot story..it’s also hot when wives suspect, really suspect, that their wonderful husband secretly needs cock..maybe they’ve forgiven hubby for having been caught wearing a bra years ago ..but they know the cravings for cock never really go away..and their knowing it is hot..Mine knows, thinking about that now and nicely hard..
JT
I’m slowly jacking my 7” throbbing cock wishing it was me! I want my GF to witness my desire for cock but to join in
she basically just plotted, set up and executed the rape of her husband.. there is nothing consensual about what happened. honestly, everyone can get a silent red line drawn with a razor across their throat in their sleep, from his wife to phil, in this story.. really hate how domination is conflated for just being a tyrant.. way too often on this site.
Better ending... Ethan escaped Phil after he caved his head in with a baseball bat. he then took his wife to a secluded cabin and brought along five friends who gang banged her for several days. Once they were done he took her to Tijuana and sold her to a cartel that owned whore houses. She never came back, dying of STDs after a couple years. Nobody gave a flying fuck expect Ethan who celebrated long and hard.