All Comments on 'A Wife for Owa Ch. 03'

This is the kind of fantasy story I've been waiting to read. Thanks.

I am enjoying this story and looking forward to more of it.

i like the twist to the traditional "nasty orc" myth.

I loved it. You have got to write chapter 4 soon. I will be checking back everyday fot the next chapter.

A well written tale. I would love to read Chapter 4 when you have posted it. Thank you for a good read.

I love this chapter where humour is included too. Luskleor turned into a tiny snake hahahaha...that is so cute. And the lusty Anna can't leave the husband to sleep in peace even though she is tired herself hahaha.

Love it! Just love it

Loved it I hope you are going to continue this story

I would say I'm starting to love this story. Really looking forward to the next chapter.

G.A.

since you wrote this, but could you consider attempting another chapter? it really was fantastic. I know many would appreciate it, I read it often, its one of the few stories i just keep coming back too

Unusual, funny, entertaining - and it seems you still have quite a story left to tell. Please, don't let this tale become just another unfinished fragment!

Abandoning a story is a way to show your readers disrespect. Please come back and finish it!

please finish your story....u write very well....and I am loving what your doing....please come back and finish this sooon

please write more. leaving cliffhangers frustrates readers

Really loved the characters,can not wait for the rest of this great love-lust story, hope there is a happy ending. Nothing like a little orky lovin.

can't wait for the next chapter

why did you stop im pissed

You have an amazing talent in writing. And you stopped. Why would you do that?

Keep writing, I'm enjoying it more than I first believed I would ! <3

please more

Unfortunately everything I have to say about how amazing I find this pales in comparison to the discovery that you stopped working on it years ago.

We'll never hear the end of this tale, will we?

But it started as a REALLY good one!

This is exactly the sort of fantasy story I have been looking for and it's never going to be finished?! UGH!