by shiresa
This is exactly the sort of fantasy story I have been looking for and it's never going to be finished?! UGH!
Unfortunately everything I have to say about how amazing I find this pales in comparison to the discovery that you stopped working on it years ago.
We'll never hear the end of this tale, will we?
But it started as a REALLY good one!
You have an amazing talent in writing. And you stopped. Why would you do that?
Keep writing, I'm enjoying it more than I first believed I would ! <3
Really loved the characters,can not wait for the rest of this great love-lust story, hope there is a happy ending. Nothing like a little orky lovin.
please finish your story....u write very well....and I am loving what your doing....please come back and finish this sooon
Abandoning a story is a way to show your readers disrespect. Please come back and finish it!
Unusual, funny, entertaining - and it seems you still have quite a story left to tell. Please, don't let this tale become just another unfinished fragment!
since you wrote this, but could you consider attempting another chapter? it really was fantastic. I know many would appreciate it, I read it often, its one of the few stories i just keep coming back too
I would say I'm starting to love this story. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
G.A.
I love this chapter where humour is included too. Luskleor turned into a tiny snake hahahaha...that is so cute. And the lusty Anna can't leave the husband to sleep in peace even though she is tired herself hahaha.
Love it! Just love it
A well written tale. I would love to read Chapter 4 when you have posted it. Thank you for a good read.
I loved it. You have got to write chapter 4 soon. I will be checking back everyday fot the next chapter.
I am enjoying this story and looking forward to more of it.
This is the kind of fantasy story I've been waiting to read. Thanks.