All Comments on 'A Wife's Awakening Ch. 01'

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Amiable69Amiable69over 2 years ago

A great story and so well written. It could have gone on longer. I am sure Melissa would have wanted more. I know I would! Amy

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ended too abruptly. My bet is the wife will be spreading her white thighs for bbc's hitting on her from now on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Pathetic, sorry excuse for a husband, invents his own fantasy, and pawns it off on his wife as a surprise? Then, throw in the bullshit myth of the magical bbc for all the sad little readers to stroke their 3" micropenis to and you have another fucked up LW story, buried under an IR tag.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Just another pile of racist shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story well written, wish it was that easy,I quess you need the right black guy to make it happen.It would be nice to hear her side of story and your conversation the next day ,keep writing

DunkirkDunkirkover 2 years ago

Melissa needs to keep Wayne's cock in her cunt. He can fill it with his cum on several organisms.

Bardot1990Bardot1990over 2 years ago

Well written. Your story stands out on that account. So much of what's written here is subpar.

OOAAOOAAover 2 years ago

VERY HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TwohappycouplesTwohappycouplesover 2 years ago

Loved this story, let’s here Melissa’s side of the story and if she’s going to keep on taking black cock.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fantastic story. Can't wait to read more.

TheRiseFromAshesTheRiseFromAshesover 2 years ago

Gotta agree. The story/build up was very good. A little short, but I'm hoping to see more chapters. Thanks for starting this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story follow up on next day and her side of. Story would be great

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

My hubby knows it's something I've had a fantasy about, being blacked. We watch interracial porn together and its instantly obvious it turns me on, I get so, so wet. You like and fancy that don't you he would ask me, Yes I would answer quietly. I'm waiting for him to say ok let's do it. I already have someone in mind.

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Amateur writer putting pen to paper to share experiences, fantasies and curiosities.