by NaturalHammer
Great chapter! I like the build-up, even if it rather slow for my taste. Hopefully there will be a new chapter soon. I'd really like to learn more about what happens to this new version of Emily. Hopefully Michelle comes up with some innovative ways of corrupting her.
Wow, some interesting development here. I love the slow progress, and I am really looking forward to many more chapters
I liked this chapter and where it's headed except for the hucow. Keep it kinky and sexy not pervered.
I am thoroughly enjoying this set, but please add to becoming, and Satan, and the bride series. Especially Becoming.. where will Claire and Emily end up? Perhaps Chris can run his own stable and finally get some! Tling all or part of Becoming from Emily's eyes and or Claire's would be a nice twist.. do please continue, its been a dry winter indeed.....
Love the erotic shopping. The humor doesn’t do it for me either. Go for the kink and big cocks, perhaps many of them. This gal seems ready-made as a fucking machine.
I thought your description of Emily being manhandled by the two business was very well written, so I gave you 4 stars. I often fantasized about my ex wife, who was very plain vanilla, working late and being put through her paces by male coworkers and then coming home to me acting as if nothing had happened to her. I wish you had stuck to the third person omniscient point of view as you started off this tale, but I think you handle dialogue quite well, and you had my cock straining as the two men worked Emily over. Kudos to you!