All Comments on 'A Wife's Dilemma Ch. 02'

This story has me totally turned on...I keep waiting for the next installments. Can you make them longer...I AM SO WET BY THE TIME I AM DONE READING, BUT I CANNOT FINISH.

Writing is terrible and there is no story here.

Enough with the descriptive narrative. It doesn't take a whole paragraph to say, "He felt my tits." Try using only a couple of well constructed sentences instead.