by nastystoryguy
Great Start!! Certainly don't want to wait a week to find out the rest of the story! Well written.
Great set up - very well written - edgy and erotic!!
Just a thought - it's very difficult to maintain a continued very high level of interest over a long many chaptered story - the characters just get tired and run out of new and different things to do. Tough road to go but perhaps possible - think about it now that you have some experience. Tough on the author as well eh - as after 5/6 chapters are you as charged up?
More please - You are appreciated - Thanks and Regards
Loved it! Please do continue the story...and quickly! Your set-up is good, and I especially loved the addition of your feelings as the bet was accepted. Good Job!
I agree with the other comments: well written, great set-up, and very hot! Hurry up with the next installments (plural!).
Fred must be desperate. But is the money situation so bad that Cindy would consider it?