All Comments on 'A Wind Blew Through Me Pt. 01'

Hope it continues!

Starts out good then my concentration is completely lost. Sorry but 'waste' is what you throw away, 'waist' is the bit that curves in, hopefully, between backside and boobs (or vice-versa). You are not alone, but spell check only checks spelling. Don't give up though.

I’m enjoying this story a lot. You’ve developed a couple of very interesting characters here, and I can’t wait to see where they go!

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

This love story is well done, with interesting characters and a fine plot. The love scene is written very well, although rather too short. Sequels to this chapter are certainly needed.