All Comments on 'A Woman and Her Mistress Ch. 02'

by Fetishhand

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Amazing story

I've followed your work since the Catwoman/Blact Cat comic you drew popped up on a site I visit and have loved it. There may be a few typo's here and there but I put this up there with Sunstone as one of my fav BDSM stories. please keep up the great work

Mymantoy999Mymantoy999over 7 years ago
As a longtime Leatherman, I truly enjoy

watching a new Master/Mistress being born. As a slave, I have helped mentor many new Leatherfolk along their journey. Although I will admit that Diesel Dyke did get a little carried away with the straight jacket.

Looking forward to reading more of their journey.

I will agree with others that you really need to get help from one of the volunteer editors here.

gentleone58gentleone58over 7 years ago
Typos But Great Story

This is a great story, but in places the typos made me guess what the word was meant to be. Most of the time the typo was quite easy to figure out the word but occasionally it was a bit of a challenge. The story is very good and I am not sure since I have never written here, but I think there are writers who will go over your work and help edit it for errors. If so, they would be worth looking into.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
When?

Your story was amazing. You have left things "open" for many more adventures. When can we expect the next installment? I am waiting impatiently.

Again, when can we expect the trip to the store?

CourtneysSubCourtneysSubabout 6 years ago
Interesting

Im fairly new here and im trying to work my way through titles and see if the stories grab at me and hold my interest. You definitly have my interest piqued. Wasnt sure how you were going to get Michelle interested and i thought when she returned from her girls night she might be intoxicated. But i loved that you didnt go that route. Insyead you gave her a curiosity that even she was unaware of. I also like that you have given her a compassionate side. One that i think that is required for the direction you seem to be taking the characters. Launa is very experienced and id love to see her in control some more. Teaching Michelle how to edge for her jumps out at me for some reason. Please keep up your work because it has a ton of potential and is alreasy keeping me watchful for the next installment. Sorry for rambling

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Epic stupidity

Stand up, bitch slap her, get dressed and leave. What's the old biddy going to do? Cry?

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing

I love everything about this story. Please more!

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