All Comments on 'A Woman's Scent Ch. 02 - My Mom'

I like this storey and where it's going, very different and your grammar is no concern to me.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Great story - love your style as well. Don’t let the grammar trolls bother you

I Don't Normally read FIRST TIME stories but I wanted to read part 2 the incest story so I had to read Part 1 first. Both stories are well-written and I felt like I got to know JJ. I was rooting for him and the twins were Smokin hot.

I loved how mom had made the decision to do whatever it took to get back JJ's sight as long as JJ realized that was the only reason why she was doing it. It seemed like a realistic plot line.

Please write more chapters

Very enjoyable story, please continue writing.

I'm not a grammar Nazi as long as I can follow your intended thoughts in the story. Great concept for a story. Kudos for imagination. Personally, I would prefer he gain his sight but keep his smell capabilities and continue his relationship with Mom. 5 Stars LM

Like this story but i think it only has one more chapter in it before it starts to get really repetitious.

I always like the smell of pussy. Specially if it’s quite musky, pungent and quite intoxicating. It’s the natural smell of a healthy woman’s pussy.

That was so hot!!! More, please!!! Does his eyesight return as he's exposed to more Taboo fetishes? Does the effect of the stars lessen as he gets used to the Taboo aspects of his newfound relationship with his momma? I can't wait to find out!!!

a nice concept, a few errors that Grammarly should have caught. Sight-site, through- threw

Very interesting twist to his capabilities. Looking forward to reading how this turns out.

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FABULOUS!! just freaking fabulous!! really enjoyed the concept very original and unique. The sex is also very well done; love the idea of the twins teaching a blind boy how to have great sex as well as the collaboration with them and his mother. You just posted the story in October so it's not been that long but plz PLZ keep this going!! additionally screw the grammar police. I rarely leave comments but I thoroughly enjoyed the story and will keep my fingers crossed you have several other chapters ready to go in the not too distant future!