All Comments on 'A Woman's World Pt. 01'

A good read nicely done

It was a nice read, but there were many grammar errors as to when you'd use past tense and present tense and mixing up the gender of Cassandra. I HOPE that wasn't on purpose- it happened way too many times. I would want you to continue this- even though I think its bull that men get their periods every two months, talk about unfair-, but it would be ten times better if you just proof read. Amazing concept even though its not original.

You confused the pronouns, made it hard to read.