All Comments on 'A Wonderful Friend Pt. 01'

I read this several times, and I enjoy each time. When they were hot with sex was a real turn on. Also, I like it when they talked, and when they got nasty talking as they had sex.

Find a proofreader and try again

The lack of proofreading and/or editing make a wonderful story challenging to read. Grammatical and spelling errors abound! I loved the story and its premise and the hot scenes. Hopefully, you will continue to submit chapters after careful editing!

A little drawn out for me. But a good story. Actually sounds like a real life experience.

Hard to read due to grammar errors. Redo after being proofed. Don't do Part 02 this bad

You need an editor. Read as if written by 7th grade student

I can't wait to read the next chapter. I too am a closeted gay man and would love to meet a man who I could be with all the time. Then I could tell my wife and come out of the closet to her. Please let me know how i can do that.

Nice. Grammar is off probably because the author is a non-English speaker/writer.