All Comments on 'A Wonderful Journey Ch. 01'

Simple but splendid narration. Keep writing! :-)

Loved your simple story and simple style and lovely ordinary conversations.

Your talk of unflattering knickers and fat thighs will suit most older women more than just nicely.

Well worth 5 out of 5.

really like this. turned me on to bits!! :)

brilliant first part . love how this was writing being used by another hot horny woman .

Great story. Thank you.

I guess there is more than one way to please yourself and another, I am sure she will have nothing but fun times ahead for her

Love to imagine these two with women friends in a six-way 69 circle. Oh, the scents!

Hot story. Love it. Also detailed description of them. Great to see normal women in stroy, not only models

A great start!