by littlebettysbangs
Wow! I love the garter belt, but what kind of stockings is she wearing? Please continue!
Congrats on your first story. There were a couple of grammatical errors that does not bother me but I brought it up because some readers will be sure to point them out, some harshly, so be ready. Overall, it was good and I hope you will lengthy your stories but that is me being selfish. Best with your writing.
I really enjoyed this story and I see that it is your first submission. Well done! Please write another anal-centric story — soon!
Beware anonymous comments condemning illiteracy that concurrently contain typos.
Good premise.
But sex just happens. No tension. Nothing that must be overcome.
No teasing.
Three stars.