All Comments on 'A Work Affair: Jess and Eric'

by littlebettysbangs

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stockingnutstockingnut9 months ago

Wow! I love the garter belt, but what kind of stockings is she wearing? Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Congrats on your first story. There were a couple of grammatical errors that does not bother me but I brought it up because some readers will be sure to point them out, some harshly, so be ready. Overall, it was good and I hope you will lengthy your stories but that is me being selfish. Best with your writing.

orbnatsorbnats9 months ago

I really enjoyed this story and I see that it is your first submission. Well done! Please write another anal-centric story — soon!

CthulhusButtercupCthulhusButtercup9 months ago

Beware anonymous comments condemning illiteracy that concurrently contain typos.

CthulhusButtercupCthulhusButtercup9 months ago

Very nice story with some amazing visuals!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good premise.

But sex just happens. No tension. Nothing that must be overcome.

No teasing.

Three stars.

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