All Comments on 'A World Turned Rightside Up - FTDS'

"with this. He fucked you, now you will fuck him, returning his fucks, since we no longer want them."

- how the fuck do you come up with this shit ? Fucking hilarious , dude. 😂😂

a perfect ending for this story

it gives me hope that there are people out there that won t allow cheaters to prosper

the way he was humiliated by the wife and her blulk it was the only plausible way for his revenge

5* 1000 hardons 99 orgasms into condoms (lol)

Satire or black humor. Either way, this one is a keeper . Funny as a 5'3" Green Beret.

No! Fucking awesome!!

Wow, nice

Revenge is sweet and necessary when they try to unman you

Hard to click when holding pot with both hands

Few errors but don't expect it to be error free

Enjoyed that enough

yu skimped over the entire episode of Lynn setting up her escape to the cops, or how she went from a seemingly devoted broken slave to someone who wanted revenge

This was beyond the pale, I loved it.

Your wit is masterful. Thank you

Sempri fi is Marine Corps not Army

Second time. That's the way to take a big, black, dumbass out of th e picture. Dark humor in more ways than one.

This may be one of the dumbest fucking stories I've read on this site.

I feel your pain, jealousy and envy. No one chooses the colour of their skin, but you choose the size and colour of the cock to fantasise over.

Appreciate your 'positive' ending and sense of humor.

,,,,,but, what a pile of shit, one of the worst stories I've ever read on this site.

Been a while since I read some FTDS. This is one of the best ones ever. Some seem to think it's over the top satire, but I think it's an absolutely true anti ir cuck story. An off color joke, a little dark humor, perhaps, but a fun read for anyone who isn't a woke cuck.

Bad news - Semper Fi is the motto of THE U.S. Marine Corps and it is an insult to the Corps for a Green Beanie to use that phrase. Unless in honor of a Marine.

Just for the record I am having trouble signing into my Literotica account and in getting anyone from Literotica to help me.

Luke

A nice little tome of how to set a cheating bitch straight...

Taking it to the extremes now, huh? I don't see what's so dark about this story. Sure, someone died but he deserved didn't he? And she proved she was a wacky broad by doing what she did?

I did get a few chuckles out of it too.

But in the end, the original, as it was, should never have been written.

It's amazing how un-erotic a story, detailing a sexual liaison, can really be.

Satire at its best

To anon with the complaint about the 'Semper Fi' reference. I am willing to bet that FTDS was pulling our pisser

CLM

stupid but a fun story

The original was gross .

Interracial is disgusting and ruins every story they force it in to .

I LIKE IT!! She got hers and so didn't Sambo...

Did Bobby96600 ever indicate that he knew he'd been pranked by the masters?

🤣🤣🤣

I bow to the master of LW satire. Green Beret bean counter stud indeed! 5*.

Little much don’t you agree? Stopped middle of page one.

Usually like your tales but this one, not too.

One of the great spoofs in the LW category! I almost laughed myself off my chair while reading it. More, Please!

Did he end up knocking Jean up? He fixed that porch gorilla and kind of fixed his slut ex-wife, too. he'll probably stay in line now...

FTDS let slip his bigotry with this one. John Holmes proved there are "big" white guys out there. No need to go to the racial stereotype for this except to make it clear you're a narrow minded bigot. That being said, I loved everything else about this story. I have no problem with killing the asshole and subjecting the slut to months of deprivation. It went a little off the track at the end with the younger twin sisters.

In all the stupidity……one stupidity stands out. Why would 5he bitch WANT to reconcile with midget-man?

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1 *

0 star - violence of any kind always gets a ZERO.

Plus I gave you a 1 star rating above to lower your average, as an incentive to reduce the violence in your stories.

I prefer that the SLUTs & ASSHOLEs experience long-term financial difficulty, or public shaming&humiliation, or the victims full recovery, with love prosperity and happiness for the rest of their lives - as more fitting punishments or revenge.

Sorry Dude total miss on this one

I loved this. Brutal. Beyond anything I would do. Perfect revenge.

Ed

Another brilliant ending to the original story. Bigotry was simply in keeping with the original story. Great fun.

What kind of pussy is nixrox? "violence of any kind always gets a ZERO" What a wimp! I will have to see if I can login from different IP addresses and raise the score on this one just to balance out this nerf herder.

The demise of poor black studly white wife banger was in keeping with how he threw hubby down the stairs. All that goes around has a way of coming back and biting one in the ass, as it did him. As for nixrox, consider, nix=slang for no. rox =slang for nuts/balls. therefor, nixrox= nonuts. It figures! LP

I didn't care for the racial stuff. Why not make it a big-dicked white guy? They do exist. The most unbelievable part was the guy turning into some sexual dynamo. He certainly could do 3 times a day, but 9? His ex-sister-in-law Jean could certainly have taken Lynn's place and they could have added Lynn back in as well. Considering her hospitalization, that's believable. A decent lawyer would have also gotten more money from the gov't. Still, a good story.

Wasn’t impressed by the Green Beanies in Vietnam.

Well written and hilarious .

That was a lot of cliches

5 stars

Even as a satire, Erotic Horror would be a better category than LW. Actually just “Horror” would do since the story was hardly erotic.

Very different. Most things were well thought out & some minor details taken care of.

An interesting & unique tale.

Bill S.

@Nixrox, the virtue signaler.

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Yeah, violence NEVER solved anything. Well... except for all those pesky wars; violence came in handy when defeating the Nazi's, actually all Germans whenever East and West Germany are united (like now). Slavery was banished with violence, the USA was formed with the violent overthrow of England's tyranny. The list goes on.

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Violence is a fact of life. Even on the elementary school playground, violence is needed to combat the bullies, a simple punch in the nose can help them grow up to be good citizens. If you think teachers can control bullies, you're a fool.

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If you say violence should be a last resort, I'll agree wholeheartedly. If you say it should never be used, then I'll tell you that those who fail to learn from history, are doomed to repeat it. "Some men just want to watch the world burn." Yup, and you're not going to talk them down.

Story was going well until he kicked her out then her fuck buddies sisters

AWESOME laughed so hard tears running down my face. AWESOME

Love it!

This one is a classic !

What you did with what was a rather poor story, turning it into a rather funny continuation, was almost magic.

5 stars, of course !

Epically hilarious. 5+

This proves that it may actually be possible to polish a turd.

You really need help

Very good dark satire

Well done, I hate to say it but you could be more vengeful, nasty , Psycho, and mentally disturbed than I am, keep it up.

That was great.you get no complaints from me.In different stories of L W the cheated husbands at the end of the story forgives depending on the offense.But! For other husbands like Jeremy don't have to put up with that shit.I don't care if she was stupidly or deliberately poisoning him it's unforgivable.Lynn can't fix this she knows that,the bigger mistake he's military.her nervousness,her trying to control the bad situation by willfully getting out of his cross hairs was a fools game to play.Reminder he a genius, observation of his slut wife tells it all to chuck the slut out.removed all evidence and made her into a nutcase.Like I sead.Stupid bitch calling the cops,he knew how'll you react.So now Lynn finds out the hard way she's been replaced by her twin sister and have to share sloppy seconds with her.Jeremy from me I will never piss you off and the writer too.I give this a 5+.I hope to read more of your writing thanks an good bye.

Utter hogwash. Thanks I enjoyed it thoroughly!

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VERY FUNNY! Well written and paced. Thank you for your time and talent. DMW

Great Story!! Loved it!!

Oh you do have a way of writing these humours stories, you do it so well.

Made me smile all the way through.

Nailed it! The obvious errors in keeping with his wriying style was very much appreciated! Uh-rah, indeed.

Lol!!!

THE DICK MADE ME DO IT!!!

Overall a decent job Thanks. Tip: not udder contempt. but utter contempt. Otherwise you are dealing with offended 🐄 cows