All Comments on 'A Yacht Full of Women and I'm Naked'

There are really a lot of typos, misspellings, and grammatical errors in this. Otherwise it could be a fun story.

Sweet story. Gave me an immediate erection.

Cute.

You should have told us how Marie was married and that she wore her wedding ring while she was making love to sissy boy. Ahhhh

Excellent story!

This is most imaginative. Well crafted. Very erotic. Certainly I noticed the grammar and whatnot but found I could read around it as it were. You do need an editor. But don’t let that stop you. Keep it coming.

This is a good story.

What an absolutely beautiful story. The nudity, the below-average penis size appreciation, the femboy protagonist, Marie. It was a bit strange that I don't think I was able to get a read on Marie's breast size, though. But it's just wonderful to have a femboy CFNM story that's gentle. We need more of that on this site.